Fantastic pilot episode if this is indeed a pilot. If it's just a one-shot, it's a shame, but still good work. The animation was very good, and although the recording for the voices could use a little work, the actual voice acting was good.
I'd definitely subscribe to watch if this became a thing. As I'm sure a lot of people would.
Fluid amination and excellent synching. The sounds was a little awkward at first, but as I got used to the flow, I was really enjoying the little song you made. Quite creative on all counts. Keep it up, sir. 5/5
This Egoraptor was pretty Egoraptor. I give it Egoraptor out of Egoraptor.
I'm not in the mood to give a fully fleshed out review, so here's some things you could have done to make it a bit better.
Actionscript is your friend. It just wants to be loved, but everyone is afraid of it. All you need to do it speak its language and you will never regret your friendship. Try making a start and replay button. It will help with the video auto starting. I don't know about you, but I hate it when a video starts on its own without me telling it to. Same with replaying. Both of these buttons are super easy to make and will make your video much more clean and professional looking.
CREDIT YOUR MUSIC. Unless you wrote and played the music yourself, you should always credit/provide a link to the artist who worked so hard to make your music. I can't tell you how much I hate it when people don't do this.
Final tip. When you're making a replay button, select the final frame of your video, go to the actionscript for that page, and type in the stop command. It will stop the video on the final frame with the replay button. It's a but of a rookie mistake, so I just wanted to make sure you didn't miss it.
That's all I had. Nice video with some excellent visuals and audio syncing. I approve and hand you my woots, sir. 4/5 8/10.
I thought when I started watching that this was going to be annoying.... and I was right. Kind of. The thing is, although I was thinking it was on the annoying side, I still kept with it. The ending also got a small chuckle out of me as well. The awkward sort of animation must have reminded me somewhat of Rage comics or something.
Anyway, the point of a parody is the be entertaining, and it was in a strange manner, so I award you with my prestigious honor of a 4/5 and a 8/10. It may have been one of the funnier things that I've judged today, but the humor is still rather hit and miss.
I used to want a capsule car. Thank you very much for ruining that for me.
That aside, great animation. Personally, I found it pretty funny despite the morbidity, but then again, I like that sort of thing. 10/10 although reference is a bit on the dated side. Still, a better parody than 99% of the stuff I blam on a daily basis x'3
Pure, Unadulterated, Win
This was an excellent parody with a lot of great visual storytelling. I like how the entire plot - save one pretty funny reference - was shown rather than told. Your animation as well as your style is wonderful and an inspiration to at least this budding flash artist. I can't wait to see more from you. ^_^ 10/10 5/5
This has to be...
The most monochromatic acid trip I've ever been on. Not too bad, really. It's short, but the animating is nice and whacky. Definately some good first steps to something awesome later down the line. 6/10 3/5
yeah I did it in a couple of hours for fun, that's why its short. Thanks for the review and the compliments.
Not bad at all. This is good, and I can tell from the amount of frames used in the movements you spent a lot of time and effort on this - and it shows :D Sprite Animation might not be the hardest stuff around, but it takes as much patients as anything else - and it's usually pretty cool looking when done right. Groovy little effects too. All in all, a great second video. I can't wait to see what you come up with later. 8/10 4/5.
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